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It's almost August..
I believe I can at least post the first few pages of 18....
The work is far from complete and my mind is very far from the subject of writing .. for now...
I believe I can at least post the first few pages of 18....
The work is far from complete and my mind is very far from the subject of writing .. for now...
"Ah! You don't know my name?
Its very simple, Lafiel you shall say.
In return I'd like to call you Jinto."
Its very simple, Lafiel you shall say.
In return I'd like to call you Jinto."
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The first eleven pages of eighteen have been posted... The work in not complete so for the moment there will be no .doc document posted.
My free time is slowly becoming my own. I'll be able to post more and write a bit more..
However I must state that my free time is still very fluid.
Thank you for your patience.
My free time is slowly becoming my own. I'll be able to post more and write a bit more..
However I must state that my free time is still very fluid.
Thank you for your patience.
"Ah! You don't know my name?
Its very simple, Lafiel you shall say.
In return I'd like to call you Jinto."
Its very simple, Lafiel you shall say.
In return I'd like to call you Jinto."
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Ty :cat_w :cat_w
take ur time.. we (or I) can wait :rofl :rofl
take ur time.. we (or I) can wait :rofl :rofl
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Another Eleven pages are now posted... Time still escapes me....
"Ah! You don't know my name?
Its very simple, Lafiel you shall say.
In return I'd like to call you Jinto."
Its very simple, Lafiel you shall say.
In return I'd like to call you Jinto."
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Still love your work man.
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Time is fleeting.. Yet I'm finding time to write a bit ...the next eleven pages will be forthcoming...
Now for a snippet....
Now for a snippet....
Spoiler:
"Ah! You don't know my name?
Its very simple, Lafiel you shall say.
In return I'd like to call you Jinto."
Its very simple, Lafiel you shall say.
In return I'd like to call you Jinto."
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Time flies but as promised (although later than I wanted it) here are another eleven pages for your reading enjoyment.
"Ah! You don't know my name?
Its very simple, Lafiel you shall say.
In return I'd like to call you Jinto."
Its very simple, Lafiel you shall say.
In return I'd like to call you Jinto."
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Is anybody reading this thread???
I'm still writing but at a very reduced pace..
*I see that cloning isn't quite perfected ..yet..*
I'm still writing but at a very reduced pace..
*I see that cloning isn't quite perfected ..yet..*
"Ah! You don't know my name?
Its very simple, Lafiel you shall say.
In return I'd like to call you Jinto."
Its very simple, Lafiel you shall say.
In return I'd like to call you Jinto."
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yes I'm reading it ^^
The story is very good please continue . I would like to read the ending too.
The story is very good please continue . I would like to read the ending too.
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I check back here every few days as well.
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wolf81inIL wrote:I check back here every few days as well.
Thank You..Firedragon wrote:yes I'm reading it ^^
The story is very good please continue . I would like to read the ending too.
The work progresses slowly.. as for an ending, do you mean this chapter, or the short story set?
"Ah! You don't know my name?
Its very simple, Lafiel you shall say.
In return I'd like to call you Jinto."
Its very simple, Lafiel you shall say.
In return I'd like to call you Jinto."
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I mean that I would like to read not only the ending of the chapter; I would like to read the complete story set. ^^
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Greetings...
The story does progress although much more slowly than I would like.. :banghead
Hopefully another week or so and it'll will be done..
The story does progress although much more slowly than I would like.. :banghead
Hopefully another week or so and it'll will be done..
"Ah! You don't know my name?
Its very simple, Lafiel you shall say.
In return I'd like to call you Jinto."
Its very simple, Lafiel you shall say.
In return I'd like to call you Jinto."
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lol whenever it gets done is cool man ^^Diaho wrote:Greetings...
The story does progress although much more slowly than I would like.. :banghead
Hopefully another week or so and it'll will be done..
your works probably some of the best fanfiction on the net, (in my opinion), so its well worth the wait
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Eighteen is posted...the word doc will be done shortly. Enjoy. :amismiling
"Ah! You don't know my name?
Its very simple, Lafiel you shall say.
In return I'd like to call you Jinto."
Its very simple, Lafiel you shall say.
In return I'd like to call you Jinto."
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Eighteen is the end of one saga. For those of you who haven't read it. I'll not spoil it.
Nineteen will start a different saga and a different style of writing for me.
I hope you'll enjoy it and it should let me be more productive.
I'm still having trouble with the Word Document for Eighteen.
It's a software issue and I should have it straighten out shortly.
Thank you.
Nineteen will start a different saga and a different style of writing for me.
I hope you'll enjoy it and it should let me be more productive.
I'm still having trouble with the Word Document for Eighteen.
It's a software issue and I should have it straighten out shortly.
Thank you.
"Ah! You don't know my name?
Its very simple, Lafiel you shall say.
In return I'd like to call you Jinto."
Its very simple, Lafiel you shall say.
In return I'd like to call you Jinto."
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Good as always man.
One suggestion. Perhaps it would be easier to break them off into smaller chunks? You're earlier, ummm chapters I guess, seem much shorter. I guess creativity grows though.
I look forward to the next section.
One suggestion. Perhaps it would be easier to break them off into smaller chunks? You're earlier, ummm chapters I guess, seem much shorter. I guess creativity grows though.
I look forward to the next section.
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*Nods*wolf81inIL wrote:Good as always man.
One suggestion. Perhaps it would be easier to break them off into smaller chunks? You're earlier, ummm chapters I guess, seem much shorter. I guess creativity grows though.
I look forward to the next section.
Eighteen should have been in two parts and in a way it was but I posted it as one large document.
From nineteen on they should be about twenty to thirty five pages in length.
It'll be easier for the reader and easier for me to proof and post.
[BB coding seventy plus pages is a pain]
Creativity does grow.
I stopped eighteen short.
It could have been another twenty pages but some of that material will show up later as flash backs.
Nineteen is about ten pages so far
I've figured out the .doc problem for eighteen. I'll post it later today.
"Ah! You don't know my name?
Its very simple, Lafiel you shall say.
In return I'd like to call you Jinto."
Its very simple, Lafiel you shall say.
In return I'd like to call you Jinto."
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I have not read chapter 18 yet (just downloaded it). But if you would like I could be a beta reader for you to help with the spelling and things like that (or at least attempt) though I must agree your story IS among the best fanfiction I have seen on the net and I think I have read at least 300+ of them and out of all of them this one and one other I have enjoyed the most and think is best written. I will post again once I have read chapter 18.
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A Snippet of Nineteen...
Spoiler:
"Ah! You don't know my name?
Its very simple, Lafiel you shall say.
In return I'd like to call you Jinto."
Its very simple, Lafiel you shall say.
In return I'd like to call you Jinto."
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Nineteen is completed and in final proofing.
There are somethings I'd like to discuss before it's posted.
Starting with Nineteen and continuing on from there the Empire will no longer be discussed in as much detail as previously chapters have done.
Lafiel has made a choice and that choice has left her in a worse position than Jinto is, that position is described in the last of eighteen and expanded upon in nineteen.
From here on we'll also look at things through the eyes of others, and those of Jinto and Lafiel as well.
You'll get a better understanding of how living on a planet affects not only the Abh, who never have had any interest in planets, but those who have lived on planets before.
We'll explore how Shahrazad has changed and how those upon it's surface now deal with Planetary Life.
I hope you'll enjoy this next series...
There are somethings I'd like to discuss before it's posted.
Starting with Nineteen and continuing on from there the Empire will no longer be discussed in as much detail as previously chapters have done.
Lafiel has made a choice and that choice has left her in a worse position than Jinto is, that position is described in the last of eighteen and expanded upon in nineteen.
From here on we'll also look at things through the eyes of others, and those of Jinto and Lafiel as well.
You'll get a better understanding of how living on a planet affects not only the Abh, who never have had any interest in planets, but those who have lived on planets before.
We'll explore how Shahrazad has changed and how those upon it's surface now deal with Planetary Life.
I hope you'll enjoy this next series...
"Ah! You don't know my name?
Its very simple, Lafiel you shall say.
In return I'd like to call you Jinto."
Its very simple, Lafiel you shall say.
In return I'd like to call you Jinto."
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It seems there no time in day get things finish.
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Greetings... If you wish you could start an intro thread....lymhfeubdach wrote:It seems there no time in day get things finish.
"Ah! You don't know my name?
Its very simple, Lafiel you shall say.
In return I'd like to call you Jinto."
Its very simple, Lafiel you shall say.
In return I'd like to call you Jinto."
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Twenty is progressing, not at a speed I'm happy with but it is progressing.. Snippet later
"Ah! You don't know my name?
Its very simple, Lafiel you shall say.
In return I'd like to call you Jinto."
Its very simple, Lafiel you shall say.
In return I'd like to call you Jinto."
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Snippet
Spoiler:
"Ah! You don't know my name?
Its very simple, Lafiel you shall say.
In return I'd like to call you Jinto."
Its very simple, Lafiel you shall say.
In return I'd like to call you Jinto."
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When I tried to download chapter 19 to read it tells me Unable to deliver file.
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Darn software foibles...:bangheadJinto wrote:When I tried to download chapter 19 to read it tells me Unable to deliver file.
It did the same for me. It affected 18 too. Try it now, it should work :amismiling
"Ah! You don't know my name?
Its very simple, Lafiel you shall say.
In return I'd like to call you Jinto."
Its very simple, Lafiel you shall say.
In return I'd like to call you Jinto."
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It is working now. thank you now I can read it after work
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Good....Thanks for the feedback..Jinto wrote:It is working now. thank you now I can read it after work
"Ah! You don't know my name?
Its very simple, Lafiel you shall say.
In return I'd like to call you Jinto."
Its very simple, Lafiel you shall say.
In return I'd like to call you Jinto."
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I've had to take sometime for myself.. there are issues in my life that need to be resolved before I continue writing.
So Chapter 20 is on hold, indefinitely. I'm not sure how long things will take to sort out on this end, but.. for the moment the Short Story is taking a vacation.
That is all..
So Chapter 20 is on hold, indefinitely. I'm not sure how long things will take to sort out on this end, but.. for the moment the Short Story is taking a vacation.
That is all..
"Ah! You don't know my name?
Its very simple, Lafiel you shall say.
In return I'd like to call you Jinto."
Its very simple, Lafiel you shall say.
In return I'd like to call you Jinto."
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